Writing for love is a pas

I agree with Night Mistress. Bring on EDWARD!!

Wow. Purely Amazing!! Whoo!! Next Chapter here I come...(once again)!!!

okay, wow. This is the best chapter so far!!

oh my god. You are so talented. You had my heart racing and everything!!. Whoo! On to the next chapter!!

ooh, yay. I love it i love it i love it!! Next chapter here I come!!

I liked it. I'll get this part over with first- your rhyming was a tad bit off. Nothing too major that I can say to change, since everyone else tore ...

Wow. The rhyming was brilliant!! :D I like it. Somehow, it portrays life in a deep, different perspective, and it isn't quite bad at all!! :wink: So good job, and ...

The lights were electrifying as me and my crew walked in. Everyone stopped and turned to stare at us with incredulous eyes. We were used to it. “They weren’t hard, ...

I like it. Are you going to write more? I really think that you should. You are a very talented writer!! _Writing for love is a passion_ or lexie ;)

Interesting. Really it was nice. I thought that your flow messed up in the2nd stanza, the last line. Maybe you could say something else. if not, then I say keep ...

OKay, first I think that your flow was a little bit off. Some parts it was great, the other I was like, oh. :roll: Ow? Did you mean oh? Just ...

ooooh, pretty.... 9/10

Thanks guys!!!! I think that we make a good team!

*heheheh* tempting, but I will fix the punctuation! :smt040

you were no where near close...sorry!!! XD!!